Hong, For the most part, these are done well. I would like to se a little more separation from each pose but it's not terribly distracting that they're bunched up because they are defined well. A couple poses with foreshortening look a little hairy - try to define the line a little more... especially in extramities (hands, feet). Again - a nice, loose line. Stay with this - but make more conscious decisions to define the form a little more. Well done.
Hong,
답글삭제For the most part, these are done well. I would like to se a little more separation from each pose but it's not terribly distracting that they're bunched up because they are defined well.
A couple poses with foreshortening look a little hairy - try to define the line a little more... especially in extramities (hands, feet).
Again - a nice, loose line. Stay with this - but make more conscious decisions to define the form a little more.
Well done.