Hong, Overall, good work. The second page is the strongest, to me - simply because you leave space around the drawings. The fist page is good but is too bunched. The poses in the last page seem too static and lifeless. I like your loose line - please continue this.
Hong,
답글삭제Overall, good work. The second page is the strongest, to me - simply because you leave space around the drawings. The fist page is good but is too bunched. The poses in the last page seem too static and lifeless.
I like your loose line - please continue this.