Hong, I like the loose line and you have defined the pose well - but for the most part, it looks like a lot of bored individuals. Did any of them stand up? Sit down? Take off their backpack? Please consider the subject in motion or in a transfer of weight. Where there is weight shift (arms propping up heads, for instance) it is well defined. Carry this over to an entire figure.
Hong,
답글삭제I like the loose line and you have defined the pose well - but for the most part, it looks like a lot of bored individuals. Did any of them stand up? Sit down? Take off their backpack?
Please consider the subject in motion or in a transfer of weight.
Where there is weight shift (arms propping up heads, for instance) it is well defined. Carry this over to an entire figure.