Hong, The last page and a couple poses on the second page are absolutely fantastic. Please think about variety in line weight and try to work loosely and lightly. David makes a good point - your line isn't too oversimplified - I think you should try to go back in and use a darker line to describe limb overlap, foreshortening and lines that posses more stress. Great work.
yeah you have great stylization without being overly simplified you line quality and "flow" are just amazing
답글삭제Great stuff
Hong,
답글삭제The last page and a couple poses on the second page are absolutely fantastic. Please think about variety in line weight and try to work loosely and lightly.
David makes a good point - your line isn't too oversimplified - I think you should try to go back in and use a darker line to describe limb overlap, foreshortening and lines that posses more stress.
Great work.